The Writing Process (steps three through seven)

Last time, we finished up step two of the seven-step writing process. As I mentioned, if you master the first two steps, you'll lay a solid foundation for any academic essay ... and that's before you really begin writing!

Now you can really put pen to paper.

Step Three: Drafting

Once you've determined your subject, purpose, and audience, and you've developed a solid thesis and outline, you can begin writing your essay. [NOTE: Take a look at the blog "Academic Essays ..." for more information on what an academic essay should look like ... more or less.]

Using your outline as a guideline, draft a solid introductory paragraph, including your thesis statement. Then, draft your body and concluding paragraphs. The key is: While you want to write as clearly as possible, don't worry about perfect grammar or punctuation. You'll cover that in steps five through seven. The point of drafting is to get your thoughts on paper.




Step Four: Incubating

This step is often skipped, but is oh-so important. Many students begin the revision process right after they finish their rough draft. The problem is, when they go right back to the draft, they're still in draft mode, so they often miss errors and flow issues.

Incubating allows you to step away from your draft and then come back with fresh eyes.  This may be the one and only time you have a professor giving you permission to go and play for a while, so take advantage of it!



Step Five: Revising

When you get done playing, come back and look at your essay objectively before moving on. HELPFUL HINT: READ YOUR PAPER OUT LOUD. If every student did this during the next three steps, I GUARANTEE he or she would correct many errors and submit better papers!

Once you've read your work out loud (I really do recommend this!), move on to step five. This is what I like to call the "macro-revision." Ask questions like:

• Do the paragraphs flow smoothly?
• Does each point support my thesis?
• Do I have enough support?
• Have I included relevant information?
• Should I move any paragraphs for logical flow?

This step allows you to take a big-picture look at your essay and revise accordingly.



Step Six: Editing

Once you've looked at your essay overall (and made any large adjustments), look at your essay paragraph by paragraph. Ask questions like:

• Are my sentences structured correctly?
• Do I have any comma splices or run-ons?
• Am I using the right words to say what I want to say?
• Am I being concise? Or too wordy?
• Do my paragraphs flow?

Step Seven: Proofing

This step puts the final touches on your essay. I recommend you read your paper out loud again as you keep an eye out for punctuation and spelling errors. I do recommend you use the resources available with your word processor; however, do not rely on them! Spell check only catches spelling errors, not words that aren't used correctly. So, for example, it would catch:

I don't think thair car is here. (Thair is misspelled.)

But it would think the following sentence is spelled correctly (which it is):

I don't think there car is here. (However, while there is spelled correctly, it is not the correct word.)

It is YOUR responsibility to make certain your final paper is as correctly- and well-written as possible.



Writing is a skill to be learned, so I encourage you to use all tools available to you in order to be as effective a writer as I believe you can be!

Keep pen to paper!

Prof. Rinehart

The Writing Process: Step One (Preparing, part one)

One of the most difficult parts of writing is simply getting started. I highly recommend your following some kind of process to help get past that dreaded "writer's block." If you Google "writing process," you'll get countless responses. Some recommend three steps; others recommend five steps. I recommend seven. This blog will cover the first step: Preparing.

Before we start, let's take a quick true/false quiz.

So, what do you think?

Now, comes the hard part. While you may feel confident that you're not alone in this sometimes frustrating world of essay writing, you still may be asking: How do I get started?

STEP #1: Preparing

First, you need to determine three key elements: Purpose, Audience, and Subject. Until you know these three things, you can't really get started.

Purpose is the "why." Why are you writing this essay? The obvious answer for academic essays is often "to get a grade." While that's certainly true, you also need to understand what kind of essay you're writing. Are telling a story? Analyzing a piece of literature?  Explaining a procedure? You need to decide what your purpose is.

Next, you need to determine your audience. This is the "who." To whom are you writing? Yes, your instructor will be reading your paper (and of course, grading it!), but usually, he or she is standing in for a general audience.

Finally, you need to determine your subject. This is the "what." About what are you writing? Most often with academic papers, your subject will be given to you (or at least you'll have a choice of prompts or subjects). If this is the case, you can go write on to developing your thesis (see blog on that topic). However, if you find yourself having to come up with a topic of your own, you may want to try some brainstorming. Unfortunately, I'm running out of space, so come back next time for brainstorming and Step Two: Planning.

Keep pen to paper!

Prof. Rinehart

Inaugral Post

Hello terrified writers!

If you've read my profile, you know I've been teaching composition and literature at the college level since 1999. I am passionate about the English language. Seriously passionate. I love to read more than just about anything else. In fact, the only thing better than reading is doing so by a clear mountain lake, just a whisper of a breeze through the trees.

As much as I love to read, I love to write. I've self-published several books, have seen my work in several anthologies, and have free-lanced for local papers. I have to admit: I'm also a "hopeful" novelist. I've finished the first books in two different trilogies. Perhaps one of these days, I'll actually do something about them.

Now, you may be asking yourself, why another blog about writing? Aren't there countless such sites already? Well, yes. However, this blog has a two-fold purpose.

The first (and more important) is that it is a resource for my students, especially those I teach online. While I certainly post information on the appropriate portal, there's only so much I can do online ... or even in the classroom. This blog gives me the opportunity to expand on classroom discussions, presentations, lectures, and readings. I'll be able to go into more detail or offer other ways of tackling assignments.

The second purpose is that we all learn differently. People who are looking for help with their writing might stumble upon a video or blog that I've produced, and for some reason, my approach makes more sense. In addition, I'll sometimes touch on issues, such as how to publish or how to combat writers block, that might be helpful for any writer.

Frankly, whatever we can do to get the message out and help people become more effective writers is fine with me.

I'll be posting lectures, presentations, and other helpful hints each Friday, so bookmark this page, and join the discussion. The first "real" post will be this Friday, July 12. See you then!

Keep that pen moving!

"Professor Rinehart" (as my students call me) or (more formally) "Saundra" or just plain "Sauni"